Reviews for "Wicked Water"

Wed May 03, 2006 8:53 pm

Oh, this is scary, Sulriel! It seems like they are surrounded by horrors -- so heartwrenching!

I feel so strongly for this horse, and he/she seems real to me.... Very well done!

- Barbara

Thu May 04, 2006 5:16 pm

Oh, yes -- I do like this version better! I think rearranging the lines does increase the impact (though I hadn't previously noticed the "flaws" you solved -- but the author always knows best Smile smiley face

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I think mentioning the horse's name first really does sharpen the focus, also.....

I like it, Sulriel!

- Barbara

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