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BellemaineChercoeur

Joined: 28 May 2003
Reviews: 106
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Sat Jun 07, 2003 12:54 am

Excellent work. Chilling, tightly paced, real sense of tension and atmosphere.
 
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NancyBrooke
Joined: 12 May 2003
Reviews: 558
Location: In a motel 6 by the airport
Wed Jun 18, 2003 8:33 pm

Yeah! Excellent ... very economical use of language and good tension! The last sentence is almost a let-down since the story is written so tightly yet applicable to several characters. Loved it!
 
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Lindorien
Joined: 05 Sep 2003
Reviews: 22
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Fri Sep 12, 2003 1:01 am

Yikes! THAT was unexpected. I almost missed the last line. I agree with Nancy it almost works against, but it is such a creepy twist. Thanks!
 
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KhazarKhum

Joined: 02 Sep 2003
Reviews: 135
Location: Quartz Hill, CA--USA
Sat Oct 11, 2003 4:58 am

Well done...I was watching FOTR with my niece the other day. When they were on Caradras & Boromir picked up the ring, she knew why Aragorn wanted him to give the ring back to Frodo: "It'll be a lot easier to take it away from Frodo than it will be from you."
 
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Saralitazie
Joined: 17 Apr 2004
Reviews: 7
Location: Stamping Property of Litzy the Lush all over Glorfindel.
Sat Jul 17, 2004 4:57 pm

Shocking - an absolute smack upside the head. I think that most people tend to think of Aragorn as non-tempted by the Ring, because he doesn't try to take it from Frodo and sends him away in his only moment of temptation, but stuff like this reminds me that yes, he was a man, and as such, he was tempted. Really, one of the biggest reasons he was able to fight it better that Boromir was because he knew evil - had walked in its shadow and fought it since his youth - and he had been raised with the wisdom of the Elves.

Danke, Ell Wink smiley face It was lurvely.
 
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Lilan

Joined: 28 Mar 2005
Reviews: 23
Location: Ukraine
Tue May 24, 2005 9:20 am

Smashing!!!

Yes, I was fooled and thought it was Boromir. I LOVED IT! The way the Ring uses one's best intentions to get control is written so beautifully. Please write something else of the kind!
 
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