Joined: 29 Mar 2005 Reviews: 1118
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Tue May 23, 2006 3:09 pm
No reviews? *sigh* Let me fix it then
I think this was very enjoyable. I like your OFC's wicked playfulness and curiosity. She's alluring, mysterious, yet innocent and honest. I also like to see you gave the twins separated voices and your idea that one of them wants to remember, but the other doesn't. Oh and the smut was delightful too
Great job! Thank you for sharing
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