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RobinKa

Joined: 29 Mar 2005
Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
Tue May 23, 2006 3:09 pm

No reviews? *sigh* Let me fix it then Smile smiley face

I think this was very enjoyable. I like your OFC's wicked playfulness and curiosity. She's alluring, mysterious, yet innocent and honest. I also like to see you gave the twins separated voices and your idea that one of them wants to remember, but the other doesn't. Oh and the smut was delightful too Very Happy smiley face

Great job! Thank you for sharing Smile smiley face
 
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airplane

Joined: 04 Feb 2007
Reviews: 47
Location: a place called home...
Thu Oct 27, 2011 10:57 pm

Loved this!!
 
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