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RobinKa

Joined: 29 Mar 2005
Reviews: 1118
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Sat May 06, 2006 10:01 am

I like this portrayal of Maeglin. In so few words, you showed us his darker and brighter side. You conveyed the destructive power of his love for Idril and his hate for Tuor, but also his attachment for Turgon, and the love that made Maeglin think of Idril at the hour of his death. Excellently done. Thank you for sharing. Very Happy smiley face


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Aearwen

Joined: 11 May 2005
Reviews: 49
Location: Austria
Tue May 09, 2006 6:20 am

As I write mainly Maeglin fiction myself, I am very happy to see that excellent portray of his last moments. Very, very good.
 
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SpaceWeavil

Joined: 27 May 2004
Reviews: 365
Location: Looking at shiny things
Tue Mar 13, 2007 4:30 pm

I'm actually on my way to look for your longer story 'Requiem' that you mentioned on LJ today, but found this on the way through your story list and just had to stop and read when I saw 'Maeglin'. I can't believe I missed this before. Beautiful use of language and you capture his voice excellently. The whole thing is really haunting and exquisite. So glad I found this!
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airplane

Joined: 04 Feb 2007
Reviews: 47
Location: a place called home...
Sun Aug 19, 2007 8:47 am

You so deserved that win ;_;
 
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Rous

Joined: 20 Mar 2004
Reviews: 503
Location: Trying to stay below the radar
Mon Mar 22, 2010 8:17 am

While not versed in the Silmarillion, I was taken away by this write. Very well done.

Thank you for sharing.

rous
 
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