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Cressida

Joined: 24 Aug 2005
Reviews: 28
Location: Illinois, USA
Sun May 14, 2006 11:40 pm
What an interesting setting! And I really like comparing Maedhros' beauty to a sunset. This situation seems to offer so many possibilities for a sequel, or further chapters.
 
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Rhapsody

Joined: 11 Apr 2004
Reviews: 479
Location: Maglor's Lap
Mon Jun 05, 2006 6:49 am
This is simply beautiful and stunning Jenni. The way you write about Maedhros' awakening and how is nurse encourages him reclaim his life. To me this piece feels almost as if Maedhros is reborn again, yes I know, with one hand less. But a new phase of his life starts and you put it so gracefully:
“I am Amaurea,” she replied. “Think of me as heralding the dawn of your new life.”

Simply wow!
 
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