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RobinKa

Joined: 29 Mar 2005
Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
Tue May 23, 2006 1:08 pm
This is a very moving portrayal of a son of Fëanor (my guess: Caranthir). Excellent writing, a good choice of topic for the drabble challenge. Very insightful and full of grief, pride, bitterness and anger. Great job!
 
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rohanion

Joined: 09 Feb 2005
Reviews: 216
Location: uk
Tue May 23, 2006 1:51 pm
Hey, raps... strong stuff!

I have never actually read the Silm.... so i don't really know the story of Feanor and his sons, but even so this was very emotive!

Great stuff.


Rohannion
 
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ellie
Joined: 30 Aug 2004
Reviews: 110
Location: Where I am now.
Tue May 23, 2006 6:13 pm
Well done! Very Feanroean and very sad to see the first fruits of the spiritual fall of this particular son or perhaps the embodiment of all of the sons of Feanor expressed in this drabble.
 
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Aearwen

Joined: 11 May 2005
Reviews: 49
Location: Austria
Thu May 25, 2006 6:47 am
As usual I am delighted to read something from your quill. Thank you also for the Author's notes!
 
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NancyBrooke
Joined: 12 May 2003
Reviews: 558
Location: In a motel 6 by the airport
Fri Jul 14, 2006 9:17 am
You create a very interesting and detached voice here, Rhapsody. I found it really compelling that the narrator would be contemplating the grace of his motions, the sound of his sword, that his victim is sliced or carved not simply killed, and that on his sword their blood is mingling.
 
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