Reviews for "Black Eyes"

Tue May 23, 2006 1:38 pm

woo, hoo! A new Eomer romance... yummy!

I liked your introduction - pink dress, white lace and green veil - ummm... very eye catching!

I did LOVE however, your descriptive language and the history you created . I love this sentance inparticularly - " All along the wall were arranged sheaves of wheat as was traditional in Dol Amroth for the Harvest Festival, the province being the breadbasket of Gondor" - AWESOME!

keep up the good work!

Great writing

rohannion

Tue May 23, 2006 2:24 pm

This is going to be very enjoyable!

Tue May 23, 2006 5:07 pm

Hi, Lia ----- so here it comes; as always an interesting beginning, so of course I am looking forward to the continuation.

Love, Frigg

Wed May 24, 2006 12:13 am

Thanks for letting me know you had a new work here! Like it so far...I mean, you gotta like a girl who is using pink as a weapon! LOL
Happy Musing!

Thu May 25, 2006 6:32 pm

This is wonderful! I hope you continue to post, and soon if you can. I thought the quote at the beginning sounded familiar, and I was right. That was dull reading (The Art of War, not your story) but very, very apt. I already like Lothiriel. No one demure and submissive could be loved by the Rohirrim. I've read several other Eomer/Lothiriel stories and none of them overly impressed me. But I'm already hooked. This is going on my Watch List. I'm looking forward to updates!

Sun May 28, 2006 10:44 am

I love how you write Lothiriel's character - so confused, so at odds with everything she's ever known. Glad you updated

Sun May 28, 2006 7:55 pm

I love it already. Your characterization of Lothiriel is great. I think that is exactly how I would act if I was 20 years old and about to be pushed into an arranged marriage. I thoroughly enjoyed Aunt Ivriniel (sp?) as well. She reminds me of my great aunt, who was an absolute witch. Can't wait for the next installment.

Mon May 29, 2006 3:28 pm

The second chapter was great! It had me laughing out loud. My family thinks I've gone crazy, especially since they don't have a clue who Eomer and Lothiriel are. I'm looking forward to more of Lothiriel's battle tactics.

Mon May 29, 2006 10:54 pm

You know, the tricks here genuinely works, I think. LOL. I love this!

Tue May 30, 2006 5:44 am

This is great.

I look forward to more. In fact, I want another chapter - now! *impatient for more!*

Very Happy smiley face

Excellent, really.

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