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brindlemom2
Joined: 12 May 2006
Reviews: 56
Location: New York
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Fri Jun 23, 2006 5:08 pm
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| Another great chapter. Love the characters, and the way they interact. Want more please |
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kelin
Joined: 18 Jun 2004
Reviews: 5
Location: where the stars at night, shine big and bright...deep in the heart of Texas
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Fri Jun 23, 2006 5:15 pm
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This is great! No simpering, swoonong Princess here! Keep up the great work!
I can't wait for the next chapter!!!
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HeatherRae
Joined: 20 Mar 2004
Reviews: 119
Location: Bossier City, LA
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Fri Jun 23, 2006 6:25 pm
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oh lord. Another cliffhanger. Great.
Just torture me, will you?!
You must write more! So that the torture of not knowing will finally end! *shakes fist*
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VanatheEverYoung
Joined: 22 Aug 2004
Reviews: 106
Location: USA
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Wed Jul 05, 2006 9:54 am
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Another delightful chapter! I'm really enjoying the interaction between Eomer and Lothiriel. It's growing so naturally, I keep forgetting that this is only chapter 6. I can't decide if the scene with Lady Eiliniel or the scene with Amrothos prepared to challenge Eomer to a duel was the highlight of the chapter. Lothiriel is so real here--a headstrong young woman who is falling in love despite her better judgement. It's happens to the best 
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VanatheEverYoung
Joined: 22 Aug 2004
Reviews: 106
Location: USA
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Wed Jul 05, 2006 10:05 am
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| That was amazing! Eomer in his full glory knocking down every obstacle in his path. *sigh* There's nothing better, is there? I wonder what Eomer and Imrahil are going to plan now? And how Lothiriel will react. I don't forsee a calm reaction from her whatever they decide. |
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RoxieRxChicago
Joined: 15 May 2005
Reviews: 108
Location: Kentucky
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Sun Jul 09, 2006 8:16 am
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Great chapter as always. Definitely looking forward to the upcoming coversation between Eomer and Lothiriel. Poor Lothiriel, she's fallen for him and she doesn't even know it yet. But Amrothos does and I'm sure he'll tease her mercilessly You write familial relationships so well. Can't wait for the next update.
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VanatheEverYoung
Joined: 22 Aug 2004
Reviews: 106
Location: USA
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Wed Jul 12, 2006 7:53 pm
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*sigh* I'm always so behind.
You're a horrible tease! I wanted to hear the conversation! Although I will admit, there's not much you can do when the story takes place in a day. You've got my mind buzzing. What did Eomer and Imrahil mean? What exactly did Amrothos mean? How will Lothiriel adapt?
Sorry this is short, but I'm really tired tonight. When I reread this chapter tomorrow, I'll see a dozen pearls I could have mentioned. |
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VanatheEverYoung
Joined: 22 Aug 2004
Reviews: 106
Location: USA
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Fri Jul 14, 2006 5:53 pm
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| Yay! Finally!! Thank God!!! It seems like it took them years to kiss. (They've had an eventful day ) I love Lothiriel's determination to help the Rohirrim in this chapter. Her logic is so much like my own! Imrahil could give his daugher to Eomer, so surely he can give a loan too. Are you going to continue this into the following Spring? I know you keep telling me it's going to be a shorter story, but I refuse to accept that. I guess I'm hoping you'll change your mind. |
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brindlemom2
Joined: 12 May 2006
Reviews: 56
Location: New York
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Fri Jul 21, 2006 3:12 pm
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Sigh, another great story. Am sorry it ended, but what a satisfying way. Will be looking foewarf to your next story.  |
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candylouwho
Joined: 11 Jul 2006
Reviews: 32
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Fri Jul 21, 2006 8:20 pm
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| I really loved this story! It was fun and I was so excited to find it updated tonight. My favorite part of the epilogue is when Lothiriel bowed to both Aragorn and Eomer. So sweet! Keep up the good work. Candy |
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