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RobinKa

Joined: 29 Mar 2005
Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
Mon Jul 17, 2006 4:45 am
No reviews...? Let me fix it then Smile smiley face

This is a great story. I love your descriptions, and I find this line especially moving: His golden hair brightened his image spilling out beneath his helm, as if Fingolfin himself emanated the lost light of the Two Trees from Valinor. Beautiful and very emotive. Your portrayal of Fingolfin presents the tragedy and yet hope. He knew he would die but his valor was not going to waste. I also love the elegant language of this story, and the line is very powerful. Great job! Very Happy smiley face Thank you for sharing.
 
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ellie
Joined: 30 Aug 2004
Reviews: 110
Location: Where I am now.
Fri Aug 25, 2006 1:26 pm
Excellent! The imagery was vivid. I could really see riding up. I agree with RobinKa's choice of favorite line. Nicely done! You write a great Fingolfin!
 
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