Reviews for "WHISPERS IN THE STREAM"

Mon Jun 26, 2006 8:05 pm

I rreally am enjoying this story! Whimsicle, but heck who cares, keep up the good work! ^_^

Tue Aug 01, 2006 9:03 am

Oh Jenni, I love this story! I think I am addicted to this one. Now that I have read chapter, I really hope to read more of this. Your writing flows and is so graceful, your narrative gives the reader a wealth of information, but not too much. Once I got started to read it, it simply swept me of my feet and the ending of chapter 2 was there before I knew it.

Just wow! I could rave on about the dialogue, so well paced, Tolkien-like. To me it feels like Tolkien should have written these two as a pair, especially the way you write it here. Jenni I love love love love this. Big Hug smiley face

Fri Aug 04, 2006 2:44 pm

*snifles* What an inevitable ending Jenni. It leaves me wondering why Haleth didn't seek out a healer of her own tribe for a potion fitting for her instead for the elves. Yet, which makes it a great story: you write it splendidly. The whole set up is just so good, I mean I can clearly see why Haleth did this, but wow this is so heartbreaking. I bet this leaves Caranthir with a lot of what if's, Orithil with a huge burden of guilt upon her shoulders (maybe she never considered that a human pregnancy worked differently) which will most likely undo her. I praise her for telling Caranthir though, she comes across as such a caring and honest woman...

So yes, I love the way you wrote this story, full circle, with the seasonal themes so perfectly worked out, you are bringing us such a tragedy: Tolkien style. Respekt smiley face

Thu Aug 31, 2006 10:07 pm

She's dead already?

Shocked smiley face

Urm...it is beautifully written though, drew me to the world like no other. Leaves so much questions, I guess it's how you meant it to be. Tragedies...*sigh*.

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