Reviews for "Full Circle"

Mon Aug 07, 2006 3:45 pm

I really like this story so please keep writing it. It is different from others I have read and I like the orginality.

Fri Aug 25, 2006 11:04 pm

Mine! That's a very good story, reflected all Buffy normal psychological traits with a good intrigue. I totally loved it. When are you planning to have other chapters? Why don't read mine at the same time? I have seven chapters already done, taking very long hours just to write one because of thinking about everything and doing my very best to write in English.

Thu Sep 21, 2006 12:58 am

Men! Chapters 8 and 9 were really specials! I really loved chapter 9 because it was most typical to Buffy's manner of killing vampires. Very interesting, I loved them all. I have not seen since a while that you had added chapters until I accidentally fell on it and read all the new stuff that you have done. Continue to write, it's an excellent stuff, I enjoyed and loved the entire story until beginning to that point.

Tue Sep 26, 2006 8:39 pm

That was good. I have jumped on it when I saw that you have added the 10th chapter. It's still good. I really live it.

Fri Sep 29, 2006 10:42 pm

Capter 11 was good. I loved the song! FROM DENIS DEYOUNG!!!! Sorry, I'm just sick-addictived about him. You have allowed me to learn one of my favourite songs from Styx because it's one of the group that I love to listen their stuff during a whole day over and over. The story is still good. Just a littel comment: you have been late to use the term Morgoth but keep on writting, I just love that story.

Wed Oct 04, 2006 10:35 pm

WOW!!!!!!!!! Chapter 12 was too good! Buffy is too lucky to had a little visit... with Morgoth for her third one! You are making me jalous of her! lol I had never thought that it will turn like this. I just like the way that you are bringing it. I wonder if Morgoth will take Buffy will be stuck once again with Morgoth?

Sat Oct 14, 2006 3:07 pm

MINE! Cahpter 13 was too good! I have never thought that it would be turned into a ... love??? relation between Buffy and Morgoth! I have totally appreciated it. It had completely taken me off guards. Please, keep on writting, I wonder what will happen into the next chapter.

Wed Oct 18, 2006 1:21 pm

Wow! Very original, the name of the child... but poor Buffy! I'm jalous of her! lol I had also enjoyed the moment with Sauron. It was too short! (Sorry, it was my fancier side because I always enjoyed when the Nazgûls, Sauron or Morgoth are into the corner.) I have appreciated the way you have made him because his mood is usually... well... as a spider would be the better word to describe his psychological side. You have made him a well controlled moment by keeping the unique way to speak as it's usual with Buffy. Congrats. I have enjoyed reading that new chapter and I wonder what will happen next. If I was Buffy, I would have kept an eye on both Sauron and Morgoth... because there are nobody more treacherous on Arda than those two... wonderful guys. lol keep on writting, you're doing a wonderful because I know how hard it is sometimes to find good ideas. I will wait eagerly for the next chapter by doing my writting job, enjoying your story sa far as it goes. You have really good stuff, pal.

Tue Oct 24, 2006 12:29 pm

Then! Sauron was treacherous! I have appreciated that part when he was using his shift-shaping and... poor Buffy! I like the character of Luthor. He seems to be friendly and willing to help. I think that it will be advantageous for her into the future events that are coming. I wonder what can be her hidden past about which one it had been mentioned during all this time. I have also really appreciated that state of risky situation with risk of being caught again by the enemy. It was really good. Keep on writing, pal. I'm sure that the intrigue will be good as it had been so far.

Sat Nov 04, 2006 2:15 pm

Wow! Chapter 16 was nice! I have loved it! The revelation about Buffy was very surprising! I have never thought that she could be a Valar as her pretty nice foe. It was good idea to do a return into Sunnydale into her dream. I totally enjoyed the reading. Please, continue on writting. You have really good stuff, my dear.

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