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NancyBrooke
Joined: 12 May 2003
Reviews: 558
Location: In a motel 6 by the airport
Thu Jun 22, 2006 1:02 pm
This has some great moments: "I’ve followed you since my father gave me this sword," "You were my honor," and "I'm impatient for it to begin" in particular. The depth and feeling you give this solder is wonderfully and fully imagined. I have trouble hearing this as soldier's voice, however, one so trained and disciplined as to rise to position as squire to the Captain General.
 

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Last edited by NancyBrooke on Thu Jun 22, 2006 6:09 pm
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Khamul

Joined: 21 May 2006
Reviews: 33
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Tue Jun 27, 2006 1:13 am
One never thinks about OCs like this squire. In such a short story you managed to bring together the pieces, make it feel like this man felt loss, like he really loved Boromir. Good work with solitary emotions!
 
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Rous

Joined: 20 Mar 2004
Reviews: 503
Location: Trying to stay below the radar
Thu Sep 21, 2006 6:37 am
I must confess to some confusion on this one. I was under the impression that it was Faramir speaking. After reading the comments before, I went and checked the summary (I had accessed it through the featured story). I admit that it makes sense, however it still works as Faramir.

Either way, a good tale and filler.

Thank you for sharing.
 
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