Reviews for "Through Daeron's Eyes"

Sun Jun 25, 2006 6:09 pm

I love your portrayal of Boromir! Not the arrogant so-and-so many authors make him out to be, but a man who would accompany one of his officers to attend his injured child. Then to take further time to visit and encourage that same boy. It's good to see a young boy's hero live up to the name! Can't wait to see more of Boromir through Daeron's eyes.

Mon Jun 26, 2006 8:09 am

Having his hero talk to him must have been a very special moment for Daeron. Boromir seemed very human in this scene, he knows that boys like Daeron are the future of Gondor and shows that he cares. Hm, I am sure that Boromir remembers his childhood where he might have done the same. Very Happy smiley face

Anyway, beautifully written,I enjoyed this

~Vil

Tue Jul 04, 2006 3:46 pm

Very good! I like that you leave the most impressive moment to last, that says it all.

Mon Jul 24, 2006 7:57 pm

Oops! I missed a place in my betaing where we should have added a couple of commas to offset a clause, and we left the word "I" out of Daeron's recital of the Code of Conduct. Sorry twin. Thanks for letting me work with you on this. Smile smiley face

Now tell Daeron to stop withholding and tell you the rest of those childhood episodes!

RowanRhys
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Tue Jul 25, 2006 2:12 am

Another amazing chapter! We were (I know I don't only speak for myself) right there with Daeron, experiencing his fear, his anguish, his pain. I loved how Laedren was able to go from captain to loving father, very nice touch! And once again Boromir was being his yummy self. Drool Bucket smiley face

Oh,

ops: sorry, got caried away there.

And on a personal note, I want to thank you for your service to our country! Beer smiley face

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