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Trix
Joined: 13 May 2003
Reviews: 5
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Sat Jun 07, 2003 12:54 am
Hey! I think your story is really good so far. The character's voice is strong. I cannot wait until the next chapter.
 
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Feawen
Joined: 13 May 2003
Reviews: 3
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Sat Jun 07, 2003 12:54 am
Thanks Trix I really appreciate that!! When are you going to post something, tell me when you do so I can read it!!!
 
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Shalemni
Joined: 28 Sep 2003
Reviews: 1
Location: Aotearoa
Sun Sep 28, 2003 7:40 pm
I think you need to reformat your text into smaller more readble paragraphs, other than that the fic is good, characters are strong and well defined.
 

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elvenprincess
Joined: 28 Sep 2003
Reviews: 9
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Wed Nov 19, 2003 6:09 am
plz plz plz keep going itz going great! Laughing smiley face
 
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StArSpLaSh

Joined: 18 Jan 2004
Reviews: 93
Location: Texas, U.S.A.
Thu Apr 15, 2004 8:00 pm
WOW! this is really good! I hope you update soon! Smile smiley face This is interesting I can't wait to learn more about her past Smile smiley face
 
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jada123
Joined: 16 Oct 2009
Reviews: 28
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Wed Nov 18, 2009 1:07 pm
very interesting. I would like to read more, but my fear is that you may not do so.

if you ever do pick it up again, let me know. I'd enjoy reading it.

J
 
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