Reviews for "Time"

Sat Jul 22, 2006 1:26 pm

Interesting concept - an 'immortal' having to learn the concept of passing time - of enroaching death.

I've always played with timelessness being an Elvish quality - one might say "I'll be right back" and you won't see them again for 30 years. Smile smiley face

I like this drabble of Arwen trying to grasp the concept, especially the line comparing it to water running through her fingers.

Sun Jul 23, 2006 1:20 pm

Very nice! Quite angsty, indeed!

I like how she´s counting. I especially enjoyed the finishing line. Very well done!

Thanks for sharing!

Anna

Tue Jul 25, 2006 10:21 am

This was very touching.

Wed Jul 26, 2006 12:04 am

You captured her confusion and distress. It's a hard subject to grasp, but you managed it gracefully. I was actually reminded of the chant "pick up sticks" with the counting of numbers. I think the subject was creative.

Sun May 27, 2007 5:32 pm

Wow, what an interesting story and composition. I like the writing style...it's very clever.

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