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Khamul

Joined: 21 May 2006
Reviews: 33
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Tue Jul 25, 2006 11:22 pm
Very cute ficlet. I enjoyed it, though I found it difficult to read because of some odd symbols. Maybe it's just my computer...but if not, I think you should remove them. And also, I suggest you add more comas, and spell check. As I said, I found it hard to read. Still, it was adorable.
 
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