Reviews for "The Tracks of Time"

Thu Aug 03, 2006 2:04 pm

Beautiful use of imagery. Well done.

Thu Aug 03, 2006 4:44 pm

I think this is the only fanfic in which I have identified with Legolas .Who has not reflected on the bittersweet passing of time?

Wed Aug 09, 2006 3:47 pm

Very nice. Poignant. Will be watching for your next Smile smiley face

Sat Aug 12, 2006 2:38 am

Beautiful. I like the rhythm of Legolas' thoughts and the 'sound' of silence, or better yet calm, that they are imbued with. I agree wholeheartedly with this thought: "There might come a day when time itself will be a burden to the Eldar that remain here" - that is how I've always viewed immortality; that, and the burden that is the passing of your friends and loved ones around you, while the signs that mark that passage remain (e.g. the planted tree - whose symbolism could be commented on for a while). I also like the abruptness of the end - while still maintaining that calm, flowing feeling, it speaks of breaking (as in 'away from something'), a sad acceptance and a hope for something to come out of it. "time treads softly on the mellyrn’s golden leaves" - lovely imagery

Sun Aug 13, 2006 6:07 am

This really sounded like something Legolas would say. Beautiful use of words and imagery. Well done!

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