RobinKa
Joined: 29 Mar 2005
Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
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Sat Aug 12, 2006 8:52 am
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I don't think I will say everything I would like to tell you about this story because I'm at a loss for words, as simply as that.
When you told me that you'd be writing a story centering on Erestor, I'd have never guessed how unique, unusual and wonderful idea you had. I was amazed, seeing those first pieces you shared with me and I already knew I'd love to see the entire story, such captivating those small bits were.
You created such a magnificent portrayal of an elf who is a popular character in fanfiction, yet we don't know much about him. Your story brought a fully rounded, well-developed characterization presented in Erestor's thoughts, the images of his past, the memories he shared and in the descriptions of those who were dear to him. We could see a noble, loyal, valiant and caring person, who was wrapped in grief and the loss of those he once loved. You conveyed such a wide range of his emotions, from sadness to anger, from happiness to despair in a one-shot, which is a great task to accomplish. I bow before your talent.
Regarding Maglor, this line described him in the most powerful way: The everlasting darkness is my fate and my burden to carry alone.
I know that he is your favorite CC and all I can say is that you did him justice.
I loved also this line: However, I knew better, for I have known Elrond long enough to know that the Lord of Rivendell would not want to witness that. More than ever it would be the culmination of all his pain: to see a new generation born without the light of the Eldar in its eyes.
This was in my opinion one of the most evocative lines in the story.
I'd like to mention that you worked many canon facts into the plot very wisely, and that magnified the impact of your writing.
All in all, this was absolutely awesome, touching, heart-warming and beautifully done story and a wonderful birthday gift for your friend. I'm impressed. Thank you for sharing it with us.
Love,
Binka |
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