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Sulriel

Joined: 07 Jan 2004
Reviews: 327
Location: Imladris (or maybe Texas ...)
Thu Aug 17, 2006 4:24 pm
This is nice Nancy. I like how it conveys his emotion, both melancholy at leaving and eagerness to be on his way.
 
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SilverMoonLady

Joined: 14 Jul 2003
Reviews: 251
Location: Breaking in a Brandybuck... *wicked grin*
Thu Aug 17, 2006 5:50 pm
Spot on for us both, I'd wager, restless feet and full heart... And eleventy-one words are indeed a most perfectly Hobbity amount! Very Happy smiley face
 
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RobinKa

Joined: 29 Mar 2005
Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
Fri Aug 18, 2006 2:03 am
This is absolutely adorable, touching and melancholic, but also full of expectations. I love this line in particular: Well, memories were easy to pack, he thought shouldering his sack; though some easier to carry than others. Very true!

Great job! Very Happy smiley face Thank you for sharing it with us.


Clap, Clap, Clap smiley face
 
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inglor

Joined: 26 Apr 2004
Reviews: 201
Location: Not here, not there, not anywhere
Fri Aug 18, 2006 9:08 am
Mark Twain Award nominee: "The door clicked decidedly behind him, and Frodo locked the sound away for another time."



I really like how you do so much in so little space. You always find a way to pleasantly surprise me.
 
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NeumeIndil

Joined: 06 Jun 2005
Reviews: 156
Location: St. Louis, Missouri, USA
Fri Aug 18, 2006 9:58 am
A perfect piece to fit the situation, this bitter/sweet leavetaking. The anticipation is there but so is the sadness, and in eleventy-one words! I'm always impressed by your drabbles and this is no exception. Brava!
 
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Pen52
Joined: 02 Aug 2006
Reviews: 28
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Sat Aug 19, 2006 11:42 am
Lovely. You make each one of those 111 words count.
 
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LadyBluejay

Joined: 03 Feb 2005
Reviews: 126
Location: UK
Sat Aug 19, 2006 1:07 pm
Some lovely thoughts and words in this. Thank you. LBJ
 
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Ariel

Joined: 25 Apr 2003
Reviews: 48
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Fri Mar 06, 2009 8:30 pm
Very in keeping with canon in tone and feel. I like this!
 
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