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Feawen
Joined: 13 May 2003
Reviews: 3
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Sat Jun 07, 2003 12:54 am
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| Wow!! What a great story, I really love it. I think its great how Legolas just doesn't fall in love with her instantly like he seems to do in other stories!! Keep it up!! |
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smileyblu7
Joined: 12 May 2003
Reviews: 8
Location: anywhere but here
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Sat Jun 07, 2003 12:54 am
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| A beautiful story! Your words made my eyes well up with tears and also made me openly smile at the same time. While it is ultimately a sad fate that Legolas seems to share with his love, knowing that the war of the ring was not lost and Legolas lived, I think it is wonderful how you seemed to make me believe that there is still hope for the lovers of your story. I am in awe! I had to read the entire fic in oen sitting because I just couldn't be torn away! Great job! I can only hope that you continue to write more fanfic for this site. |
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BellemaineChercoeur
Joined: 28 May 2003
Reviews: 106
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Sat Jun 07, 2003 12:54 am
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| Lovely. Wonderfully written, great sense of pace and emotion, and nicely drawn characters. Well Done! |
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sheraiah
Joined: 16 May 2003
Reviews: 27
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Sun Jun 08, 2003 7:44 pm
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I love this story. Well written, satisfying, and includes smut, what more could anyone ask for? I'm screaming for a sequel, but I told y'all that already.  |
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Maram68
Joined: 12 May 2003
Reviews: 114
Location: West from East
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Sun Jun 15, 2003 7:25 pm
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| Great elf-smut .... which fills my ... heart with immense joy. Thank you! |
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JMac
Joined: 13 May 2003
Reviews: 4
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Sat Jul 05, 2003 6:57 pm
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| *swoon* great story. Really great story. It's hard to come across many Legolas/OFC stories that are really worth reading. But y'all's is definitely one of the best. Please...write a sequel!! |
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thearcher627
Joined: 24 Jul 2003
Reviews: 1
Location: N.J.
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Thu Jul 24, 2003 9:40 am
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| I've been searching the Legolas sites for something worth reading and finally found it in your story. To bad it couldn't be visual. This is a beautifully written story capable of letting someone envision in their minds how splendid it would be to see this beautifully stunning elf fall in love and show how truly passionate he can be. God I wished it were me! |
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sculder
Joined: 16 Aug 2003
Reviews: 12
Location: Sacramento, CA
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Wed Aug 20, 2003 2:25 am
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This is one of the best pieces of fanfic I've ever read... and I've read quite a bit! Great job, keep up the good work!
PS - Are you a paid writer? You should be!  |
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Viv
Joined: 25 Apr 2003
Reviews: 673
Location: Texas
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Thu Nov 13, 2003 4:58 pm
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| Well, I finally got around to reading this... I know, it took me long enough. All I can say is kudos. This is a very fine story, even with a satisfying end. The characters both behaved consistently -- even somewhat tragically -- and yet managed to grow a bit. They seem more layered and less giddy at the end, even though they have found trooo lurve. I especially appreciate how you avoided the typical happily-ever-after ending. But, you know, you did leave this open... you could have them moving through the centuries, always chasing after one another. Is there a sequel? |
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LuthienTinuviel
Joined: 29 Dec 2003
Reviews: 312
Location: Dancing in the clouds.
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Sat Jan 24, 2004 9:42 am
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| I agree, nice one. Not too sappy or too tragic, a path I can't help going to *embarssed* hehe... good work! |
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