Reviews for "Eternally"

Tue Jan 27, 2004 11:20 am

This is one truly beautiful and poignant story. I was so enthralled and spellbound I finished it in one go and desired little to do anything else. Even when my boyfriend called, I found myself wanting to read this story instead. Very Happy smiley face

I also involuntarily found myself drawing nearer to the monitor than optometrists would recommend, and smile at the screen at romantic parts or furrow my brows at plaintive parts.
The smut was also done very tastefully.
Brilliant story!

Sun Feb 08, 2004 12:49 am

WOW!!!!!!! GREAT STORY!! I love the whole ironic(though romantic at the same time) twist that Isobelle has a peice of Legolas' true love inside of her. It's a very interesting concept, for 'em to be reunited again&again in different lifetimes. Chs 6 & 7 were especially well-written with all the emotion and passionate, tastefully done smut! I was very impressed...& I haven't even finished reading the story yet! lol I highly recommend the story! Smile smiley face

Wed Feb 11, 2004 5:31 pm

Well, I've finished the story, and I got 1 word for ya... SEQUEL!!!!!!! Smile smiley face

Wed Mar 31, 2004 3:25 pm

Great concept.I really enjoyed the entire story! Although...you are truly EVIL for ending the story there; may we hold out hope for a sequel???? I really hope so Very Happy smiley face

Fri Apr 02, 2004 7:21 pm

I've read up through chapter 4 but can't access anything beyond that. HELP!!! Please? I'm riveted and can't stand not being able to access more story! *whimper* Somebody?

lol I kept going back and clicking again and again, getting page not found over and over until finally there was chapter 5! *squealing with glee* I'm gonna keep reading now. *vbg*

Fri Apr 02, 2004 8:58 pm

*screeching now* Nooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!! Whatever you do you CAN'T let her die! Oh please? They are so perfect together!

This story is so absorbing I've ignored everything else for it this evening and nearly picked up the monitor to chuck it out the window when I couldn't access chapter 5 earlier. lol What a spell you wove with words, crafting images for the mind's eye full of light and life! To say well done is too much an understatement. No, I'm impressed, amazed and in awe.

*applauding* Bravo!

Tue Apr 06, 2004 2:07 pm

I'm not a great fan of elf/human pairings, but this fic had me enchanted from the very beginning. It has the right amount of romance, angst ... and even the glimmer of hope. You have managed to make an elf/human bond believable and have given it depth -- you have presented a love that survives many lives of men and that trascends time without becoming burdening or too ... cheesy (am I allowed to say "cheesy" in a review ... and here I am trying to sound all professional Wink smiley face

!).

To me the most poignant moment is when Legolas sees his old lover through Isobel. It is such a moment of closure in the way they speak in front of the fireplace of their bond and their love. Maybe Legolas was somewhat cruel to not release her from her bond to him ... but I think he also shows that even though she aged, he stayed always close to her, loving her just the same, as he told her he would do.

Beautiful, touching, and a very original approach to a sometimes overdone fanfic topic. It was refreshing to read. Congrats!

Mar

PS: Yes, and the smut was outstanding!

Mon Apr 26, 2004 5:42 pm

I am 41 years old and I never had a man make love to me like that. Do you know where I can find an Elve? Maybe I should print the chapter when they first make love and have my husband read it. I can buy him a blonde wig and some elven ears, LOL! Just kiddinding. I really enjoyed the story, I read it all in one day. I Thank You for this wonderful story.

Thu May 13, 2004 6:23 pm

Wonderfully elegant love story; the pairing is not overdone, nor is she condemned to the hellpits of the Mary Sue. It probably didn't need the smut to be erotic, but smut never hurts.

Wed Nov 24, 2004 1:16 am

Sad, and amazingly beautiful at the same time. I'm in awe of your fluid dialogue and description - classic writing to say the least. Excellent tone and character, and a very original idea. It was absolutely lovely, and the meloncholy by the end defineately left me sighing. That is a nice feeling to have- proof of an excellent story. Wonderful to the last sentence. I'm very glad you decided to share your gifts of the written word with us! Loved it, loved it, loved it!

Oh, and I might add...hot and not just a bit heavy! Wonderful through and through, Chere...most excellent!

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