This is a really good story. I loved the descriptions you wrote about and how he loved Isobel for Isobel and not Isobel for Lily.
mistybutterfly
Joined: 17 Apr 2005 Reviews: 27
Location: *tap tap tap* Hello, I\'m in your monitor. Can someone let me out?
Thu May 05, 2005 2:31 pm
This is one of my favorite stories. The end took me by surprise and at first I was like 0h no! Are you planning a sequel?
jenjan24
Joined: 04 Jan 2007 Reviews: 2
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Tue Jan 23, 2007 12:45 pm
I loved this story. I felt so bad for them both, but at least they will find eachother again...eventually. This has to be one of my favorites. You are an awesome writer and I'm glad I found this story.
FaithJessel
Joined: 22 Jan 2007 Reviews: 2
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Thu Apr 26, 2007 5:17 am
I think I have read this story about eight times now. So it's high time I reviewed it don't you think?
This lovely story pulls me into a gorgeously romantic
and erotic world. I love your character descriptions . Many writers just can't recreate what it is that makes Legolas
so fascinating and desirable.
You made him real without taking away any of his beauty and mystery. You also made him very sexy without
overdoing it and keeping him true to his character and history.
Isobelle is a well rounded and (gasp) flawed character that all women who read this fiction will
be able to identify with. (and envy I can confidently say!) So glad she doesn't have
a paragraph dedicated to how her hair falls down her back in silky waves (yawn) and we that actually get to know her
thoughts and feelings.
i adore the seduction scene - even more than the smut ( an inadequate word to describe such an erotic scene)
This is what makes your story such a cut above all the rest. i can't believe it didn't win first place in the
Mithrial awards.
What were the judges thinking? Do I sound like I'm gushing ?
Please write more stories. You have a gift and obvious love and respect for writing and it's readers.
Very much appreciated and throughly enjoyed.
Faith
trixiepixie9378
Joined: 23 Jun 2010 Reviews: 4
Location: here and there
Tue Jun 29, 2010 8:58 am
I love this story!! I just found it yesterday and read it today and i couldn't stop reading. Now on to the next part