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SilverMoonLady

Joined: 14 Jul 2003
Reviews: 251
Location: Breaking in a Brandybuck... *wicked grin*
Thu Apr 22, 2004 9:59 pm

Simply lovely! What a marvelous and beautiful little gem! Thank you for that glimpse Very Happy smiley face
Watching and waiting for more Wink smiley face
 
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Viv

Joined: 25 Apr 2003
Reviews: 673
Location: Texas
Tue May 04, 2004 9:30 am

GypsieRose said
> The only thing is that I keep wondering exactly how old he's supposed to be! Not that that's a big thing.

It is kind of vague, ain't it? Fact is, I don't know kids that well, so I honestly don't know the age. My hubby used to coach football for 9-year-olds, and some of those kids could probably have grasped this kind of concept. Not all... some just wanted to run around a lot and sniff flowers. So I guess 9 or 10? Would that make sense? What would I have to do to make that age more consistent in the story?

Thanks you guys for feeding back!
 
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Monaleoht
Joined: 02 Mar 2004
Reviews: 352
Location: I travel with the wind, as free as an eagle soaring the great firmament above Arda
Thu May 06, 2004 1:18 pm

The depth in this story was touching. A lovely piece! Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face
 
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paranoidangel

Joined: 14 Sep 2003
Reviews: 5
Location: Britain
Sun Feb 13, 2005 12:42 pm

I loved the connection between Eagles and hope (or Hope!) in this. And Gilraen's relationship with Elrond, and the other elves. I think if I was her, I'd be slightly scared of Elrond too.
 
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Alassante

Joined: 11 Dec 2004
Reviews: 459
Location: Hitchhiking to Rivendell
Sat Feb 19, 2005 3:01 pm

I thought this story was very sweet! Estel was adorable and I love the interaction with Elrond and him. It was good to see because in the future there is such a relationship with Estel and the elves. Lovely story! Very Happy smiley face
 
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