Joined: 13 Aug 2006 Reviews: 55
Location: Australia
Mon Aug 28, 2006 7:30 pm
Wow. That was so beautiful! I loved it.
Rhapsody
Joined: 11 Apr 2004 Reviews: 479
Location: Maglor's Lap
Wed Sep 06, 2006 8:52 am
Very gently written Luthien, I love how you conveyed the passing of time and how compared to Maglor it must have passed like a breeze.
RobinKa
Joined: 29 Mar 2005 Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
Sat Sep 09, 2006 4:24 am
This was very nicely done and it flowed smoothly, almost like a wave. I agree with Rhapsy. I liked your portrayal of Maglor and the mortal OFC, and you conveyed the sadness of their relationship, the hope and comfort they found in one another, very beautifully. Thank you for sharing