Reviews for "One Night"

Tue Aug 29, 2006 2:17 am

Great story telling! Eagerly waiting for more! Very Happy smiley face

Tue Aug 29, 2006 5:02 am

Another installment of the saga! YAY!

I just savored the first two chapters and I'm yet again happy to see the series continue. Poor Walda though. No wonder Morwen and Folcwyn were worried about him. And the twins were adorable. I don't think I would've gotten accustomed to their chatter Wink smiley face

But the older women were right, they all needed some changes. I suspect more fun regarding the young twin gals department Laughing smiley face

Eagerly waiting for the next chapter. Thank you for sharing!

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Binka

Wed Sep 06, 2006 2:00 am

I knew you were up to something... But you lulled me into a false feeling that nothing wrong would happen, by providing an excellent scene in the tavern. I've got a clear picture of the crowded room in my mind: people drinking, laughing, jesting etc., Morwen and the other women carrying tankards. Very Happy smiley face

I just loved the scene with Eomer's companions, LOL. “He speaks again! We must have a toast!” Háma said, holding his tankard aloft. *giggles* Well, well, those twin gals guarantee a lot of fun.

Then, the talk between Morwen and Flocwyn. I like Folcwyn very much, she seems to care about Morwen and is concerned about what is going on around.

I'm eagerly looking forward to reading the next chapter. Please, don't make us wait too long!

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Fri Sep 08, 2006 12:40 am

Oh my! This chapter was hilarious! The singing contest was the best way to break the tension Very Happy smiley face

I can't stop laughing, LOL. Oh those naughty Riders and mischievous twin gals Very Happy smiley face

“Then does his Highness have one in mind?” Blithe asked, turning to study the prince now seated at her side.

“Know you one called ‘Roll Your Leg Over’? My cousin has enjoyed it on previous occasions.”

“Some verses,” Bliss replied, looking at her sister, “though we by no means know all of them.”

“There must be a hundred, at least,” Blithe chimed in.

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And so on...

Thank you for a good dose of laughter early in the morning.

Looking forward to the next part Very Happy smiley face

Fri Sep 08, 2006 8:57 pm

Tee Hee... I do enjoy a good drinking song. This series just gets better and better. I don't know if I've left you a review for any of these. If I haven't, I apologize. I'm a binge reviewer...

Anyway, I've thoroughly enjoyed what I've read so far. I love the dynamics of Morwen and Gamlings relationship. And I think the way you've written the relationships and interactions between the various women at the Dragon's Hoarde is great. Walda is a wonderful character as well. Kind of fatherly, if it's possible for a guy that runs a tavern/whorehouse to be fatherly. He genuinely cares about the women he employs. I have to say I'm worried about him Sad smiley face

Can't wait for the next installment.

Thu Oct 05, 2006 2:30 am

I knew it... I just knew it wouldn't be an undisturbed night. A demolished tavern, a whole bunch of infuriated Rohirrim, some more or less serious injuries, frightened women...

The conversation between Morwen and Eomer really gave me chills. Can't wait to see the next part.

Amazing work! Very Happy smiley face

Sun Oct 08, 2006 7:53 pm

Very well done chapter. Very well done story period!

Thu Oct 12, 2006 9:58 am

First I want to say, OH YEAH! It's posted Very Happy smiley face

This chapter is fantastic, and I love every little bit. The scenes in the shops were funny and added much light to the dark mood the the previous night. Morwen, oh she was awesome Laughing smiley face

Then, the message and the subsequent talk with Gamling... I was sure that she'd confirm what he expected. Somehow, I didn't see any association with the events in the tavern in what Morwen was going to tell him. Poor Gamling though, it was so touching to see him want to be a father, and this was all in all very emotional scene (his hand on her belly Crying or Very sad smiley face

). But the end got creepy as well. Each time Grima's mentioned the atmosphere's getting tense.

More, please, soon Very Happy smiley face

Sun Oct 15, 2006 7:01 pm

Wow... i'm loving it! Quick! Quick! I can't wait! PLEASE publish next chapter as soon as you can! Everything that you've written is just prue talent, I'm loving it!

Thu Nov 09, 2006 12:50 pm

It was very good. Thanks for writing it.

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