Reviews for "The Touch of His Hand"

Mon Sep 04, 2006 9:10 pm

This is a very touching story with a surprise ending. I love the fact that Haldir was married! Laughing smiley face

And, that he needed to be comforted by his wife... although, I think she needed comforting, too. But, still I liked the fact that this strong warrior that was out encouraging all of his men had someone to come home to. Very nicely done. Thanks for sharing.

Tue Sep 05, 2006 1:03 pm

This is very nicely done. I like the theme of his hands throughout and switching to her hands at the end.

Tue Sep 05, 2006 4:17 pm

I agreee with the other two posts. Yes, it is so good to see something like that and a married Haldir instead of the the regular, already boring stuff. Great! Hope to see more from your quill!

Wed Sep 06, 2006 1:09 pm

Liked the underling tenderness of both the warrior and the healer. Nice touch on the last bit, warrior and wife.

Wed Sep 06, 2006 1:19 pm

Very subtly and beautifully written Very Happy smiley face

I really love the way in which the healer described Haldir as a brother, warrior, commander, and a husband. This was a touching, gently told tale. Thank you for sharing Smile smiley face

Wed Sep 06, 2006 1:54 pm

I really loved your story , it was beautiful, of course I am a diehard fan of Haldir there is no other elf quite like him(even if he was married in the end) Rolling Eyes smiley face

Wed Sep 06, 2006 2:34 pm

Ow Ellie, yet again such a fine work coming from your quill. I like the flow in this short work: it reads gently, has a good pace and a beautiful build up. You can sense that both hold up an appearance to the outside world that they can keep it together to those who depend on him: Haldir being the commander with a wink (LOL shooting in the target of his brother), your original character dispensing hope and serenity. But when they mingle their fear, you can see how they strengthen each other. I love it how you bring it to full circle. Simply beautiful!

Tue Sep 19, 2006 8:33 pm

This is definitely a well done, thought out story. I like the flow - the paragraphs connect seamlessly - and, as Sulriel said, the theme of his hands throughout the piece.

Thank you for sharing this.

Thu Jan 11, 2007 2:25 pm

Beautiful.

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