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ElflingImp
Joined: 14 Jul 2005
Reviews: 128
Location: Some where in Middle Earth
Wed Sep 06, 2006 1:36 pm
I almost died laughing at this and I am still laughing......... Wave smiley face
 
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sivan
Joined: 30 Oct 2003
Reviews: 57
Location: Mirkwood
Fri Sep 08, 2006 7:18 am
Hannon-le, mellon-nin.

I enjoyed reading your story, it's awsome, though now you gave me bunny... lol.

Thank you.

Sivan Shemesh
 
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Dragontamer77

Joined: 31 Jul 2006
Reviews: 37
Location: Happily traveling through a far green country.
Fri Sep 08, 2006 8:48 am
Hey,
'say it, say it, say it....'
fine I will
that was hilarious, very cute! Rolling around on the floor in tears, my dear. Mischevious lil' Greenleaf Laughing smiley face annoyed twins Head bang smiley face Glorfindel so tolerant No No smiley face Me just laughin my head off!
 
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NierielRaina

Joined: 05 Sep 2006
Reviews: 40
Location: Texas
Fri Sep 08, 2006 9:53 am
This was very cute! A great little plot bunny! i would suggest you find yourself a beta reader though to help you. There were several errors, the ones sticking out the most being

dishrivelled - I think you meant dishevelled

And it's Imladris...not Imraldis...that was misspelled every time...

but you've got a great story here anyway...
NiRi
 
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