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Malinwen
Joined: 23 Dec 2005
Reviews: 168
Location: Ondolindë
Fri Sep 08, 2006 8:10 am
I like it; short and simple. Gives good ground for perhaps some additions? Usually, at least from what I see in RL, those that yearn for love seek something beyond their reach...and that 'something' is not always far away...more oft it's around them all the time. They just have to find it.
Maybe I've given you some ideas, maybe not *g*. I like your way of writting, I'd be happy to read some more. Good going. *thumbs up and a grin*
 
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Dragontamer77

Joined: 31 Jul 2006
Reviews: 37
Location: Happily traveling through a far green country.
Fri Sep 08, 2006 8:36 am
Me like. Perphaps a stoy will come off this? Smile smiley face
 
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RobinKa

Joined: 29 Mar 2005
Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
Fri Sep 08, 2006 12:58 pm
Very touching and sweet. I like it Very Happy smiley face Thanks for sharing Smile smiley face
 
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Rhapsody

Joined: 11 Apr 2004
Reviews: 479
Location: Maglor's Lap
Mon Sep 11, 2006 11:06 am
Very sweet... I hope that this Sindarin elleth will either set sail soon or that her loved one will cross the seas to come to her.
 
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Pen52
Joined: 02 Aug 2006
Reviews: 28
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Tue Sep 19, 2006 8:24 pm
Lovely and deliciously emotional.
 
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