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Rhapsody

Joined: 11 Apr 2004
Reviews: 479
Location: Maglor's Lap
Sat Sep 09, 2006 1:40 am
Oh Ellie! How cute! You have me on the edge of my seat here, first reading the chilling battle of Rumil fighting Orcs and keeping him at bay with excellent skill. Then suddenly the reader realises that what we see is Rumil's utter desire to be fighting just like his adar and big brother where Haldir explains to his father how an elfling can be so fully consumed by such a whish. A very wee!dance of desire! Big Hug smiley face
 
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RobinKa

Joined: 29 Mar 2005
Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
Sat Sep 09, 2006 2:48 am
I agree with Rhapsy. This was such a nice, heart-warming little tale of a boy who wants to be a warrior like his father and older brother. Such a cute picture you painted here. I'll have this warm feeling all day long. Thank you for sharing Smile smiley face
 
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LuthienTinuviel
Joined: 29 Dec 2003
Reviews: 312
Location: Dancing in the clouds.
Sat Sep 09, 2006 8:57 am
I agree with the cuteness level Wink smiley face. Very, very familiar situations with little boys.
 
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