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RobinKa

Joined: 29 Mar 2005
Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
Tue Sep 12, 2006 9:22 am
Drool Bucket smiley face

Now, THAT was a hot beginnig! Dayum, girl! Where has my mind gone off to? Wink smiley face

Thanks! Very Happy smiley face

And HE deserves all the praise!
 
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WhoaNellie

Joined: 21 Nov 2006
Reviews: 34
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Fri Nov 24, 2006 1:14 pm
Where's the rest? You stopped just as it was getting good. Very good build-up with a good balance of visual, emotional and physical description to weave a delightful (albeit far too short) a piece.

Warmest Wishes,
Whoa Nellie
 
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FatiferousPoet

Joined: 01 Oct 2006
Reviews: 59
Location: West Coast, USA
Fri Nov 24, 2006 1:20 pm
More please! Heheee.... I loved the last line: "He takes me away to his bed to come alive for one last time."
 
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airplane

Joined: 04 Feb 2007
Reviews: 47
Location: a place called home...
Sun Aug 19, 2007 8:34 am
Hot!! Very Happy smiley face
Seriously, there should so be more...
 
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