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Spydot
Joined: 19 Jan 2005
Reviews: 15
Location: Canada
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Fri Oct 06, 2006 11:59 pm
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| He brought her his mother's desk....awwwwww. You totally rocked this chapter. This seemed like the perfect push Lothiriel needed to decide that she wants to be a good wife and queen. And I love that Eomer looked like a waterfall had fallen on him....so awesome. Can't wait til the wedding! |
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KristyDi
Joined: 11 Jun 2005
Reviews: 42
Location: GA
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Sat Oct 07, 2006 9:36 am
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| I'm a sucker for Eomer/Lothiriel stories and I'm especially enjoying this one. I love your Lothiriel, reluctant at heart but determined to do the best she can. I was sad when the chapter came to an end. I'm not beign critical, I just wanted to see what happened next. I'll be looking foward to the next one! |
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krazykataave
Joined: 17 Dec 2004
Reviews: 127
Location: Immortalized by John Denver
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Sun Oct 08, 2006 7:50 pm
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| Nicely done, I like your various takes on the Rohirric couple. Looking very forward to reading the next chapter. |
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Spydot
Joined: 19 Jan 2005
Reviews: 15
Location: Canada
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Sun Oct 15, 2006 11:35 am
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What a great wedding. My goodness, at least it wasn't ordinary!
I loved this line, "I could not put it off much longer: marriage was creeping up on me" -- really in character with the Lothiriel you've created. Lovely chapter, can't wait for the wedding night! |
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Rede
Joined: 02 Jun 2004
Reviews: 46
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Tue Oct 17, 2006 1:03 am
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| OHHH!!!! This chapter was SO perfect! You captured Gimli's character beautifully! I can NOT wait for more! Great job! |
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Rede
Joined: 02 Jun 2004
Reviews: 46
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Tue Oct 24, 2006 2:48 pm
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| Ah! Damn! You ALWAYS leave us hanging! So cruel. But so very good at the same time. Keep it up, I absolutely ADORE this! |
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Spydot
Joined: 19 Jan 2005
Reviews: 15
Location: Canada
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Tue Oct 24, 2006 2:59 pm
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| I'm so nervous for Lothiriel after reading this chapter. You did a beautiful job conveying her anxiety. The 'don't look at it' part was just hilarious and it was a great touch. It must be just incredibly difficult for her to look at that bed and think of spending the rest of her life sleeping in it. This is such a foreign concept to us modern girls but you really make it accesible and I can totally relate to her. I love her little signs of courage and how she bolsters herself up. Amazing chapter! |
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Malinwen
Joined: 23 Dec 2005
Reviews: 168
Location: Ondolindë
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Sat Oct 28, 2006 2:42 pm
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oooh cliffhanger!
I just finished catching up with this story, and I love it!! can't wait to see the next chapter...  |
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brindlemom2
Joined: 12 May 2006
Reviews: 56
Location: New York
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Tue Oct 31, 2006 2:03 pm
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| I have read several of your other takes on these two and I think I like this one the best. Eomer shows strength but is capable of tenderness. Quite the hunky package. Also like the attitude of Lothy. She does royalty proud. |
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Shadow
Joined: 18 Jun 2006
Reviews: 32
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Thu Nov 02, 2006 5:53 am
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| keep up the good work. I cant wait 2 c more! |
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