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Pen52
Joined: 02 Aug 2006
Reviews: 28
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Tue Sep 19, 2006 6:24 am
Nice idea you have there.

You have some formating issues(clustered paragraphs), so you might want to correct that. Also, the piece loses something of its potency towards the end, and feels a bit rushed, but it's nothing that can't be fixed.

All in all - I like it. Smile smiley face
 
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ElflingImp
Joined: 14 Jul 2005
Reviews: 128
Location: Some where in Middle Earth
Tue Sep 19, 2006 3:17 pm
Very sweet! Smile smiley face
 
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