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Lindorien
Joined: 05 Sep 2003
Reviews: 22
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Sat Sep 13, 2003 12:18 am

This is WONDEFUL, Ariel. I remember seeing this over at HA -- it was a crossover challenge, was it not? If I did not tell you then how much I LOVED this, I am telling you now. What a treat to reread it. Beautiful characterization. Absolutely beautiful, I absolutely was there with Mablung, feeling his despair and acceptance at how things are. Okay, I'll stop gushing.
 
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NancyBrooke
Joined: 12 May 2003
Reviews: 558
Location: In a motel 6 by the airport
Thu Sep 18, 2003 11:44 am

Good character studies; I thought your tracing of Mablung's feelings and their repurcussions particularly insightful and compassionate. Good job!
 

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KhazarKhum

Joined: 02 Sep 2003
Reviews: 135
Location: Quartz Hill, CA--USA
Wed Feb 18, 2004 9:38 pm

Wonderfully handled; they are completely and absolutely believeable. Like most couples married a long time, they can read each other at a glance.

Now--when's the next part?? Smile smiley face
 
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