Reviews for "The Hunter's Song"

Mon Sep 25, 2006 2:26 am

Oh, this was just adorable, lovely beginning Smile smiley face

I really love how you portrayed a young boy who had to deal with welcoming his little brother into the family. His mind was full of doubts as he thought that no one would love him anymore. He felt so lonely and left out.

This reminds me how uncertain and angry I was when my brother was born. I can so relate to Maglor's feelings, because I, too, had to move in to another room, etc. Rolling Eyes smiley face

Very well done, and I'm looking forward to reading the next part Very Happy smiley face

Mon Sep 25, 2006 7:35 am

This is lovely. Poor Maglor. It can't be easy to suddenly have competition for everyone's attention. I really like the portrayal of Feanor as a warm, loving father instead of a cold perfectionist. Brava!

Mon Sep 25, 2006 8:57 pm

Wonderful story. I loved this glimpse of family dynamics that is universal to every race and culture! Surprised smiley face

I'm looking forward to the next installment.

Wed Sep 27, 2006 6:58 am

A lovely glimpse into the inner workings of an Elven family - shown through Maglor's eyes. Thank you for sharing.

Sun Oct 01, 2006 3:13 am

Chapter 2: I just love this portrayal of Celegorm as a lazy teenager, musing and rambling on about his family and his own place in it while lying under the stars. Like every youth, he seeks for answers to help him shape his identity and purpose. He's so adorable Very Happy smiley face

I can picture him in my mind clearly. I also like how he describes his father and older brothers. And finally, he gets the sign he's been searching for Smile smiley face

Again, brava, and I'm eager to read more!

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