Reviews for "Yours to command"

Sat Oct 07, 2006 9:38 pm

HA! I thought maybe that she was blind, but dismissed it. I'm glad I was right because it adds such a unique facet to this story. I'm really looking foward to seeing how this develops.

Sun Oct 08, 2006 5:10 pm

Man did I ever get broadsided! Very interesting idea and I thought you wrote it well and it was handled so too.
Like the others, I can't wait to read more!
Cheers

Sun Oct 08, 2006 7:48 pm

Very good story! I think it is absolutely wonderful that you have taken Lothiriel to a newness that I don't think any other writer has done. Looking forward to reading more.

Fri Oct 13, 2006 1:28 pm

I don't think it's possible for me to love Lothiriel more! Your descriptions of how she deals with her condition are amazing and very interesting. Eomer is very sweet, trying to stick up for her to her father. Beautiful chapter as always Smile smiley face

Fri Oct 13, 2006 11:14 pm

Dude. I'm going to slap her father.

I like this Lothiriel!

Sat Oct 14, 2006 2:14 pm

Wonderful chapter. Lothiriel's frustration comes though so much that I was frustrated for her. And it's great that we're seeing the situation from her point of view. No description of movement of facial expressions, just what she feels and hears. I can't wait for more!

Oh and I really hate Anamaira.

Sat Oct 21, 2006 1:54 am

What a lovely job. I love the paralell between the old useless pony that Lothiriel feels compelled to save and Lothiriels's perception of her own uselessness. As soon as I saw that a pony was the bone of contention I knew Eomer would wind up with it, but I love how he surprised himself by volunteering to take it.

This chapter did not make me love Anamaria anymore. I did enjoy Lothiriel's unintended little barbs though. The "Do you know what kind of company they keep?"
"Not really. Do you" was my favorite.

And the creepy bad guy at the end can only be up to no good.

I'm really looking foward to the next chapter.

Sat Oct 21, 2006 12:37 pm

I found myself laughing and grinning at my computer like an idiot during this chapter. The fight over gallant Galador was hilarious. The pony reminded me off a mouse my parents caught when I was a child and I made them drive out to the country with me so I could release it. As an adult now I probably would have argued to destroy the poor pack horse but I completely understand that Lothiriel doesn't feel useless and she doesn't believe Galador to be useless either...even if he actually is. Speaking of which, my love of Eomer now knows no bounds. It was a great impulse for him to take the horse and it was just adorable. This is a very original story and I'm just loving it.

Sat Oct 28, 2006 2:44 pm

have just caught up with this after a hectic RL, and I must say tis wondeerful! I love it! Eomer is such a gentleman..and already bewitched hehehe!

Thu Nov 02, 2006 9:12 am

I'm constantly amazed that you can come up with so many stories for the same two characters! I get far too attached to my first idea, and I can't seem to ever let it go. You've done a wonderful job creating new personalities for Lothiriel and Eomer, yet keeping them essentially the same. I'm stunned that one slight tweak of personality leads to an entirely new story. To top it all, they're still compatible! I was a bit late starting to read this, and now I'm positive I'll be putitng off work and term papers to read updates.

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