Reviews for "Yours to command"

Sun Nov 05, 2006 8:13 am

Lialathuveril, as I told you earlier, I really like the new image of Lothiriel that begins to show here. Far away from the average ideas of her character, I am looking forward on how she will develop within this story. I hope it will be a long one! There are so many new, never-though-about possibilities in this way of portraying her. The way how you describe her own perception of the world aroun her is quite unique too and gives some great new insights in the world of Tolkien.
PLease post another chapter soon! I am really looking forward to it!

Wed Nov 15, 2006 3:46 pm

You can't just leave her there! Ack, you have me on the edge of my seat.

I am very much enjoying Eomer's character in this. Seeing this story through his eyes is great. I love how he's offended by the suggestion that he'd get rid of Galador and how he comments that the noble who put the dogs down deserved Lothiriel's wrath. In that same little bit you show us just how restricted her life has become. Her family is too close to see it, but through Eomer' eyes it's so obvious.

Ok I'll stop gushing, but I'm beginning to think you're a genius.

PS Please save Lothiriel soon.

Sun Nov 19, 2006 9:10 am

Hi Lia,

I don't think I've left you a review for this one yet, but I think this is my favorite so far. I've said this before and I'll say it again, you do so well at writing familial relationships. Your characters as always are fantastic. I'll be eagerly awaiting your next update.

Thu Nov 23, 2006 10:59 pm

1. Lothiriel rocks! Smacking a warg to protect Alphros by smell and sound alone, wow. And impressing Eomer King in the process.

2. Not only is Eomer a great warrior, he's modest enough to know his limitations and honest enough to credit to a bilnd women with bravery not once but twice in front of others.

3. Of course Anamaria fainted, she's a useless twit.

4. I bet when Eomer finally choses Lothiriel publicly the Lady Wilwarin will have either sone devious scheme or some amusing historonics (sp?)

5. Rules, scary Muzgash guy has rules? I mean I'm glad he does. Eomer might be in big trouble if he didn't.

Great chapter! I actually said "Oh Goodie" when I saw the update notice in my inbox. I can't wait to see who figures out that Eomer is developing feelings for Lothiriel first. ANd when will Lothiriel's feelings grow. I bet she has crossed marriage off her list of possibilities in life because of her blindness so I doubt she's even thinking in that direction about Eomer. And what wiil her father and brothers say? And what will Eomer's advisors say about their King courting a blind woman? Making her blind was such a great idea.

As always, can't wait to see what happens next.

Fri Dec 01, 2006 3:53 pm

Lia,
a great new chapter in your story. I like the way how you get your characters defined, they all have a story and a well portrayed psycholoical background. Just the little glimpse you gave us on the motivation of Lady Wilwarin, as little sympathy I can manage for her, shows a lot more depth than the usual design of evil characters. II can imagine it is had to write the evil ones as fine as the good guys, but you have the skill to do so. am looking forward to you portrayal of Mûzgash, to take a guess: he is the heir of the king of Haradrim that Theoden killed in the battle of the Pelenor?
Lothiriel and Eomer are both great, esp. as they begin to open up a bit.
Well, I have to hurry. Thank you so much for the new chapter!
Bye
valieexport
PS: Will we see more from Galador? I MISS him! Smile smiley face

Fri Dec 01, 2006 4:09 pm

Lady Wilwarin is gonna be devious isn't she? And I'll bet she is NOT happy that Lothiriel got to sit next to Eomer during the feast.

I'm glad you gave Lothiriel a pretty and pratical dress to wear.

And look how comfortable she's getting with Eomer. Not only does she admit that she dosen't know what's on her plate she allows some of her inner feelings about her situation to show.

Then Eomer understands and attempts to help in an unobtursive way.

I so look forward to each new chapter of this story!

Wed Dec 13, 2006 5:33 pm

Well, this fic is just as enchanting and consuming of one's interest as your other fics, which is to say, very much so! I eagerly await another installment, and I especially applaud the revitalising of the plot idea, which is very well done in this fic. It's not a typical hurt/comfort at all, but a very real story of the struggle to admit one's weaknesses while still being true to one's strengths and personality. I do love Lothiriel's personality in this story, she's awesome. Smile smiley face

Fri Dec 22, 2006 12:08 pm

I'm sorry I skipped reviewing a chapter. Holiday rush and all.

Anyway. I'm still loving this. Eomer goes rushing to Lothiriel's resuce only to need rescuing himself. Such a sweet scene. WHy do I feel that trouble waits inside?

Wonderful chapter!

Wed Jan 10, 2007 9:31 pm

This was a great chapter, Lia. We got to see Lothiriel's vulnerable side. So far, she's been blind, but still strong and brave. She's still all those things, but they mean so much more knowing what she went through after the accident. It's torture reading your stories chapter-by-chapter! I never in my life thought I would be so addicted to Eomer/Lothiriel. I can't get enough now.

Sun Jan 28, 2007 5:46 pm

Haven't reviewed for a bit. Enjoying this! Write on, write on.

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