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MMC
Joined: 04 Jan 2007
Reviews: 10
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Mon Jan 29, 2007 12:20 am

Really enjoying this story. It will be interesting to see where you take this.
 
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rossui
Joined: 17 Apr 2004
Reviews: 10
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Wed Jan 31, 2007 8:02 pm

This is SO delightful. The depth and consistency of the characters is impressive. The humor seems so natural. I hope this is a very long story that you update promptly. Except a long story will mean it will be a while before Eomer sees what is standing right in front of him..... You are a gifted writer. More, please.
 
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KristyDi

Joined: 11 Jun 2005
Reviews: 42
Location: GA
Tue Feb 06, 2007 6:17 pm

I know I haven't reviewed in a while, sorry. But I have been reading and enjoying.

I like seeing how Eomer has slowly come to see Lothiriel differently. But now I'm worried about how daddy will react.

Muzgash still creeps me out, and now he's got family history with the Dol Amroth party. Oh dear.
 
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VanatheEverYoung
Joined: 22 Aug 2004
Reviews: 106
Location: USA
Wed Feb 21, 2007 1:20 pm

You'll have to forgive me for not reviewing more often. I've been very behind lately. My erratic schedule is starting to annoy. The plot has progressed quite a bit since I last read this story! I couldn't believe how many chapters I've missed. I love reading about Lothiriel coming into her own. You do such a wonderful job of making it clear that she's not suitable to be the Queen of Rohan simply because she was a Princess of Gondor. Wilwarin is a nasty piece of work and I hope she gets her hair ripped out. Here's to hoping I can read the next chapter when its posted and not 2 months later.
 
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Daeuial

Joined: 11 Apr 2004
Reviews: 44
Location: NYC
Mon Feb 26, 2007 10:20 am

Oh, I wish she would just say, 'Congratulations on your upcoming nuptuals!' so he could say, 'WTF???' but I suppose that wouldn't make for good drama. Sad smiley face

Oh well, you keep us coming back for more! Very Happy smiley face
 
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KristyDi

Joined: 11 Jun 2005
Reviews: 42
Location: GA
Mon Mar 05, 2007 12:42 pm

Oh poor Eomer, completly blind sided by a hurt and angry female.

And poor Lothiriel, thinking he's playing with blind girl's affection.

Lady W is in for trouble when her deception is found out!
 
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luka
Joined: 29 Oct 2006
Reviews: 1
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Mon Mar 05, 2007 1:19 pm

I'm praying the deception won't keep standing for long: it is so utterly frustrating. It really makes me want to come inside the story, kick their buts and whisper some hints ... I absolutely love the storry, so much that you can get me all worked up when those increddible characters begin to misunderstand each other. I hope they can move past it quickly as I assume other troubles are already brewing... thx for your lovely writing!
 
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stoneflwr1
Joined: 24 Mar 2005
Reviews: 38
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Tue Mar 06, 2007 12:11 pm

I agree, the tension between the two of them makes it difficult to wait for the next update! Such a good chapter! I hope Wilwarin gets her due soon!
 
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MMC
Joined: 04 Jan 2007
Reviews: 10
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Mon Mar 12, 2007 10:30 pm

Ooh! Its getting exciting! Keep it coming.
 
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rossui
Joined: 17 Apr 2004
Reviews: 10
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Tue Mar 20, 2007 4:53 pm

How wonderful to come home and learn you had posted another chapter. Unfortunately all it does is make me want more! It continues to be a captivating tale.
 
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