Reviews for "Yours to command"

Mon May 07, 2007 2:33 pm

"Don't worry" she says, "Don't worry!" I'm plenty worried. But even so Go Lothrirel! I hope she broke his fingers and made his hair all kinds of ugly and uneven.

Let Eomer rescue her soon please. I fear what will happen if she's with Muzgash much longer.

I'm worried that they'll be able to get her out of the city now that the gates are going to be opened. Oh, but if they do then Eomer can attack them on the plains with his Eored. That could be good.

Waiting semi-patiently for the next installment.

Tue May 15, 2007 12:13 pm

AAAAAAAA! Evil cliffhanger! But this chapter is so exciting! I can't imagine what a terrifying and difficult task it would be to escape from captivity, as a blind person in an unfamiliar place. I really hope that dirty scrub is not around the corner...

Tue May 15, 2007 11:11 pm

Great story! The next chapter should be a real nail biter. I'm enjoying it very much.

Tue May 22, 2007 1:58 pm

woo, what a chapter. I am so glad they did what I was thinking, use the kid to tail Eomer, who would notice him? And what kind of guy uses an old woman as a hostage?!? Can't wait to see what Eomer does next. Smile smiley face

Fri May 25, 2007 6:33 pm

Yikes! I'm sorry I haven't reviewed in so long. I've been holding my breath for a month or so. Plus, when I review it is admitting to myself that it will be about a week until there is a new chapter. So I waited a few days on this one. This story continues to be enchanting. The sweet and courageous Lothiriel you have created is refreshing. Eomer is, well, the Eomer I always imagine. Sigh........... Please update soon (and often)!

Mon May 28, 2007 1:03 pm

Great chapter. I am enjoying the story very much. You do a wonderful job on fleshing out your characters and they are very lifelike in the way they interact with one another. I hope that one of Eomer's wounds were not caused by a poisoned weapon, but I suspect it was hence the villain's smile!

Mon May 28, 2007 8:03 pm

Muzgash died, that's good. But he died with a smile on his face. That's bad. There's poison isn't there? Eomer isn't out of danger yet.

But Yay, Muzgash is dead. Great chapter and action sequence. It must have been torture for Lothrirel to hear, but not be able to see and know what was going on during the fight.

Great chapter.

Mon May 28, 2007 8:32 pm

I could totally visualize the fight, it was very well written. But now all I can think about is 'what kind of poison does that scrub put on his blade? is there an antidote???' Sad smiley face

Tue May 29, 2007 12:47 pm

Great chapter. The fight scene was amazing. Hope Eomer is OK.

Mon Jun 04, 2007 1:45 pm

arrgh I KNEW IT

If I wrote this, this is how it would have ended:

Lothiriel: *kisses*

Eomer *dies happy*

Lothiriel: Nooooo

But luckily, I didn't write it, you did, and Eomer will likely have a pervy response to being kissed, and thus remain alert and awake just long enough for King Magic Hands to return with an antidote. ^__^

I love this story!

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