Reviews for "Laundry Day"
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thegraybluebird
Joined: 02 Oct 2004 Reviews: 47
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Mon Nov 22, 2004 12:38 am
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"'...Now I have to find Legolas and express my gratitude to him...'"--Awesome *fans self*
So, when do we gett Leggy in the picture?  |
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ghettoelleth

Joined: 06 Nov 2004 Reviews: 378
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Tue Dec 14, 2004 3:14 pm
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| Priceless smut Do. I read this the other day but didn't comment as I usually figure that writers don't really want to hear from someone who hasn't posted or someone as new to fanfic as I am. But then I read the thread about why readers don't post reviews and, frankly, I'm a little ashamed. So here is my humble opinion. This was lots of fun and, as someone said to when I first came here, if ya want an idea on how to write a good randy smut scene, read 'laundry day' |
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SecretKeeper

Joined: 13 Dec 2004 Reviews: 25
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Sat Jan 22, 2005 9:03 pm
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| Sensory overload. *drools, sweats and pants* Whoooa....... |
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Hellion

Joined: 22 Nov 2004 Reviews: 28
Location: Connecticut
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Fri Jan 28, 2005 1:02 pm
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You promised smut and gave smut. Very good choreography with the threesome. Very expressive writing.
Note to self - Don't read smut ever again at work. ops: Wipe smile off face.  |
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BlottedInk
Joined: 23 Jul 2005 Reviews: 1
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Sat Jul 23, 2005 11:34 am
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| This is an amazing story. : pant, pant : Lucky girl. Please, continue writing!! |
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magis
Joined: 28 Jul 2012 Reviews: 9
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Tue Nov 06, 2012 3:27 pm
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| very big grin... Beautiful - Hot - Love it! |
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