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thegraybluebird
Joined: 02 Oct 2004
Reviews: 47
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Mon Nov 22, 2004 12:38 am

"'...Now I have to find Legolas and express my gratitude to him...'"--Awesome *fans self*

So, when do we gett Leggy in the picture? Very Happy smiley face
 
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ghettoelleth

Joined: 06 Nov 2004
Reviews: 378
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Tue Dec 14, 2004 3:14 pm

Priceless smut Do. I read this the other day but didn't comment as I usually figure that writers don't really want to hear from someone who hasn't posted or someone as new to fanfic as I am. But then I read the thread about why readers don't post reviews and, frankly, I'm a little ashamed. So here is my humble opinion. This was lots of fun and, as someone said to when I first came here, if ya want an idea on how to write a good randy smut scene, read 'laundry day'
 
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SecretKeeper

Joined: 13 Dec 2004
Reviews: 25
Location: Cardinal Rule 1: Never state your location.
Sat Jan 22, 2005 9:03 pm

Sensory overload. *drools, sweats and pants* Whoooa.......
 
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Hellion

Joined: 22 Nov 2004
Reviews: 28
Location: Connecticut
Fri Jan 28, 2005 1:02 pm

You promised smut and gave smut. Very good choreography with the threesome. Very expressive writing.

Note to self - Don't read smut ever again at work. Surprised smiley faceops: Wipe smile off face. Very Happy smiley face
 
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BlottedInk
Joined: 23 Jul 2005
Reviews: 1
Location: US of A
Sat Jul 23, 2005 11:34 am

This is an amazing story. : pant, pant : Lucky girl. Please, continue writing!!
 
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magis
Joined: 28 Jul 2012
Reviews: 9
Location: somewhere over the rainbow
Tue Nov 06, 2012 3:27 pm

very big grin... Beautiful - Hot - Love it!
 
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