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RobinKa

Joined: 29 Mar 2005
Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
Sat Oct 21, 2006 1:29 pm

Well, yes, he couldn't sail west because of the oath and because he was convinced he should guard something that had given him so much pain that he had cast it into the sea.

You captured the tragic dualism of Maglor's fate perfectly, in so few words.

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NancyBrooke
Joined: 12 May 2003
Reviews: 558
Location: In a motel 6 by the airport
Mon Oct 23, 2006 10:35 am

This is wonderfully provocative and evocative, Rhapsody. I liked how the tone evolved from sadness and obsession to anger and vigilance.
 
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