This was heartrending from a child's perspective. I have the impression that her son was grown when she departed, but it still is nicely written and poignant. Good job!
Dragontamer77
Joined: 31 Jul 2006 Reviews: 37
Location: Happily traveling through a far green country.
Thu Oct 26, 2006 1:58 pm
Oh hon, this was very powerful. Really makes me want to cry a good smidgen of writing, my dear.