Joined: 11 Apr 2004 Reviews: 479
Location: Maglor's Lap
Mon Oct 23, 2006 11:53 am
Oh Nancy this is special, especially how you weave in the past with the present where Boromir stands at his mother's tomb where he hopes she returns to him again, just as he watched her swim. I already got warm fuzzies with the 'fimming' and this personal touch makes it a very personal story.
RobinKa
Joined: 29 Mar 2005 Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
Thu Oct 26, 2006 4:55 am
I agree with Rhaps. It was very personal, thoughtful, sad and touching drabble. Great job
Istarnie
Joined: 15 Sep 2006 Reviews: 25
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Thu Oct 26, 2006 11:20 am
This has been on my mind for quite some time today. It seems to me to be a special piece of writing. I adore the 'fimming', yet the rest of it is so poignant.