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Rhapsody

Joined: 11 Apr 2004
Reviews: 479
Location: Maglor's Lap
Sat Oct 28, 2006 11:30 am

This is a lovely drabble about hope and endurance under the toughest circumstances. I love how you wrote Frodo here, very earthy and hobbity, depending on Mother Nature to see him through.
 
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RobinKa

Joined: 29 Mar 2005
Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
Sun Oct 29, 2006 1:57 am

Congrats on your first LotR drabble Very Happy smiley face (Well, I saw that you posted another story yet Thumb smiley face ) I like this a lot. It's a very nice glimpse at a small creature that had a hard and great task to accomplish. Well done!

Binka
 
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Istarnie

Joined: 15 Sep 2006
Reviews: 25
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Sun Oct 29, 2006 3:45 pm

I like this, Poet! Frodo walking the road as if alone, except for the comfort and communication from nature.
 
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FatiferousPoet

Joined: 01 Oct 2006
Reviews: 59
Location: West Coast, USA
Mon Oct 30, 2006 10:16 pm

Thanks you gals! (guys? gals? heh)

I really appreciate the feedback and perhaps previously mentioned that this was my first LotR piece. Doh! Wasn't sure how it would come off to you experts, so I'm glad you found value in the piece. Merci!!
 
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trekqueen
Joined: 07 Jul 2004
Reviews: 43
Location: Chambers of the Balrog Slayer
Wed Nov 01, 2006 11:44 pm

Lovin' it! Frodo's internal focus on the elements around him are very intense. Particularly because the Ring takes so much out of him and takes him to another level of his consciousness, he needs something to focus on through the monotony of travel... and that is the nature around him. Just lovely!
 
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