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FatiferousPoet

Joined: 01 Oct 2006
Reviews: 59
Location: West Coast, USA
Sat Oct 28, 2006 1:58 pm
The first piece out of the two POVs, by far, is my favorite drabble out of the two. The imagery and emotional connection to the surrounding setting came across loud and clear. Also, the yearning for those who wait for him.... very sweet. Nice job!!!

My favorite piece of wording: "The watery wind chilled him...." That set the tone immed. for me. Bravo! Wave smiley face
 
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RobinKa

Joined: 29 Mar 2005
Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
Sun Oct 29, 2006 3:24 am
Oh, Rhapsy, this is stunning! I almost felt the chilly wind.

I love that way in which you worked the glimpses at Celegorm and Aredhel's past into these two drabbles. Indeed, they found themselves in the middle of a heavy storm, but the thought of the other, their memories, could bring them comfort.

Excellently done!
 
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Elfique

Joined: 13 Feb 2010
Reviews: 11
Location: Londonia
Fri Jun 11, 2010 7:55 am
Very evocative descriptions! lovely little drabble
 
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