Joined: 01 Oct 2006 Reviews: 59
Location: West Coast, USA
Wed Nov 01, 2006 10:13 pm
The dialogue in both of these pieces are well done: The pacing good and the ineractions very appropriate given the characters aned situations. I felt bad for Graham and enjoyed Riley's stance with a solider mentality/training. (I will admit however, when I read a warning of non-con sex and it opened up with two guys... I was like... 'huh?' Hehe... I take it there's a lot more to come yet, yes?)