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NancyBrooke
Joined: 12 May 2003
Reviews: 558
Location: In a motel 6 by the airport
Mon Oct 30, 2006 5:25 pm

Tee hee hee! Very amusing! You brought this episode back to life very nicely - and a bit naughtily, too! your coda was very enjoyable.
 
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FatiferousPoet

Joined: 01 Oct 2006
Reviews: 59
Location: West Coast, USA
Fri Nov 03, 2006 10:19 am

Greetings! The dialogue in this piece flowed nice, however - not remembering this episode, I wish there was more that explained what they are talking about. I'm making the assumption that it was him dreaming of her and perhaps intimate acts, but unfortunetly, as ST:NG hasn't aired in my house for quite some time, I fear I have no solid idea what they're referring to or why she shows up only to leave after a few rounds of speeck.

If you've seen/remember the eps, I'm sure it's well plotted out, but that is my feedback as one who does not recall. Smile smiley face I hope you find that helpful.

Last to say, it was written well that it made me feel like I wanted more. This story left me wanting to know what on earth really happened. That's a good thing you've done in sucking in the reader's curiosity. Smile smiley face
 
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