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KhazarKhum

Joined: 02 Sep 2003 Reviews: 135
Location: Quartz Hill, CA--USA
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Wed Sep 17, 2003 11:02 am
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Lovely, sweet, nasty smut...
Did you ever read "Sir Gawain & The Green Knight"? I wonder, because the theme of the lady of the house freely offering herself to the guest is central to that work--as is his refusal of such a gift.
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Ariel

Joined: 25 Apr 2003 Reviews: 48
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Wed Sep 17, 2003 5:53 pm
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KhazarKhum said
> Lovely, sweet, nasty smut...
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> Did you ever read "Sir Gawain & The Green Knight"? I wonder, because the theme of the lady of the house freely offering herself to the guest is central to that work--as is his refusal of such a gift.
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> khazar
Actually, I have and enjoyed it immensely. But you could tell that, couldn't you? I have always seen some parallels to the pagan Green Knight and Tom Bombadil and this tale just naturally followed. My friend Regina gave me the idea to use the dream sequence to complete the tryst in a way compatible with canon and I was off!  |
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Lindorien
Joined: 05 Sep 2003 Reviews: 22
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Thu Sep 18, 2003 1:05 am
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| Whoa! I think a cold shower is what I could use right about now! I recently reread 'In the House of Tom Bombadil ' for a silly little summary version of LOTR I have been working on. In truth, I do not think I had read that chapter in 20 years, I find Tom so annoying. So reading it now, with much more adult eyes, I remember thinking, "Frodo is soooo taken by Goldberry! What a pairing that would be!" And then I'm wandering around here and what do I find? Yikes! This is very nicely written, Ariel. Bravo! You may make me a reader of hobbitfic yet. |
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Ariel

Joined: 25 Apr 2003 Reviews: 48
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Thu Sep 18, 2003 5:27 am
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Lindorien said
> Whoa! I think a cold shower is what I could use right about now!
I aim to please! Yes, I always thought the poor boy was quite taken with her - in fact of all the ladies he comes in contact with, Goldberry is the one who seems to thrill him the most. It seemed only fair to give him something in canon - if possible - and she seemed the most likely candidate. |
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NobBoffin
Joined: 19 Sep 2003 Reviews: 1
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Fri Sep 19, 2003 4:06 pm
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I have just read this rather interesting piece and I agree it could have happened. No doubt I feel that way due to the quality of the writing, it was excellent and the story seemed entirely credible and I must say rather stimulating, so to speak. Keep up the good work. |
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SilverMoonLady

Joined: 14 Jul 2003 Reviews: 251
Location: Breaking in a Brandybuck... *wicked grin*
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Fri Apr 02, 2004 3:57 pm
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Yum!
*should definately not be reading this at work*
Wow..... you know, I admire well written smut because it is explicit enough to evoke images and stir the senses, but it stops just before that fine line where it would become crass. You are truly talented!
I am utterly officially green with envy
Excuse me...... gotta call my hubby for a date |
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Monaleoht
Joined: 02 Mar 2004 Reviews: 352
Location: I travel with the wind, as free as an eagle soaring the great firmament above Arda
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Tue Jun 01, 2004 9:41 am
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sweet! Very well done!  |
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