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NancyBrooke
Joined: 12 May 2003
Reviews: 558
Location: In a motel 6 by the airport
Tue Oct 31, 2006 11:42 am
This is such a wonderfully full vignette, Rhapsody. You heard so much in this scene. You tell Zoe's entire story - her love for Wash, her place on the ship, her mourning, her past with Mal ... everything important about her without ever really stating it. Wonderful.
 
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FatiferousPoet

Joined: 01 Oct 2006
Reviews: 59
Location: West Coast, USA
Wed Nov 01, 2006 10:00 pm
Very tight and together piece. I enjoyed it very much - especially the line "She's tore up plenty, but she'll fly true." It leaves me with the impression that Zoe is speaking of herself more than the ship.
 
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Viv

Joined: 25 Apr 2003
Reviews: 673
Location: Texas
Wed Nov 15, 2006 11:44 pm
*sniff* I was pinned by that line, too. The Zoe character is so magnificent; she deserves fic, and especially one so poignant.
 
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NeumeIndil

Joined: 06 Jun 2005
Reviews: 156
Location: St. Louis, Missouri, USA
Wed Jan 10, 2007 2:48 am
Zoe's line always kills me, but the leaf image you've used so well is really what resonates with me now that I've seen the film and the full series. It took me straight back to Wash over the controls muttering to himself. Very well done, Rhaps. :hugs:
 
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airplane

Joined: 04 Feb 2007
Reviews: 47
Location: a place called home...
Sun Aug 19, 2007 8:05 am
;_; That scene got to me so much in the movie. You captured and enhanced it. Just lovely....
 
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