Joined: 29 Mar 2005 Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
Fri Nov 03, 2006 12:51 pm
I liked it very much. You've done a good job comparing the times of peace and war with the constantly changing seasons. It was very nicely, gently written, yet it left a thought-provoking feeling. Well done. Thank you for sharing
Rhapsody
Joined: 11 Apr 2004 Reviews: 479
Location: Maglor's Lap
Sat Nov 04, 2006 6:37 am
This feels like a some sort of rhyme children learn at school to remember the signifance of two great wars against the evil Sauron: the War of the Last Alliance and Ring war. You brought this very effectively. It reads easy on the eye and yet there is a lesson buried underneath it! Greatly drabbled Rous!