Reviews for "Thanks from the Inside"

Fri Nov 03, 2006 10:28 am

This is a lovely drabble Viv! I never had thought much on what River *did* with the Bible she challenge of Book's. You have put an intersting spot light on a very scattered character and the twist of normal subject matter one finds with River is beautiful.

You did an excellent job and I applaud your verse and creativity.

Sun Nov 05, 2006 10:30 am

This is an absolutely wonderful insight into River's character, as well as a whole set of great insights into how religion can be perceived and appreciated in a not necessarily religious mind. I only hope my own prayers can be so straightforwardly witty should I ever try my hand at saying them.

Shiny. Wink smiley face

Mon Nov 20, 2006 10:25 am

I know you posted this elsewhere before, but this re-read has the same impact as it had back then. I am wondering if this is a nice gapfiller between the moment Book discovers what River has done with his bible. This work has a very Whedonesque feeling about it! This is strongly and very very shiney!

Tue Jan 09, 2007 8:35 pm

Exceedingly on point! Totally in character, it feels just right from that young woman's heart and mind Smile smiley face

Shiny!!

Wed Jan 10, 2007 2:51 am

Wow. I always have trouble as a writer getting into the minds of unconventional characters. It would flat out terrify me to try to write River, and you did it so well here. Shiny indeed!

Tue Apr 24, 2007 8:34 am

Way to go, Viv. I'd think it would be hard to capture River's inner voice, so crowded as it might be with other things, but you do a very good job here and give her a clear presence.

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